Showing posts with label Christian Gothic Historical Novel. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Christian Gothic Historical Novel. Show all posts

Thursday, March 6, 2014

GATEHAVEN: Part 4 of 10 Parts and More

by Molly Noble Bull


Gatehaven, my Christian Gothic historical, was published in trade paperback and as an e-book on Tuesday, March 4, 2014, and the e-book version is on sale now for only $2.99 at Amazon, Barnes and Noble, Christianbook.com and other places. The sale ends at midnight on March 17th.
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I divided the first six chapters of Gatehaven (54 pages) into 10 parts.
,   Part 4 of 10 is posted here at Writers Rest today. Scroll down to find it.
.   Part 5 of 10 Parts of Gatehaven is posted at Carole Brown's blog on March 7, 2014.
But if you miss Carole’s blog today, come back to this blog tomorrow, and Part 5 will be posted here as well. 
And if you want to read Parts 1 to 4, this is the place. Scroll down, down. 

After reading these 10 Parts of Gatehaven, you should know whether or not you like Christian Gothic novels. You will also know whether or not you want to buy and read Gatehaven.
Click here if you already know. (grin)

Now for Part 4.  




Part Four of Ten

Ian decided to visit his pastor at his home before turning in that evening. He hoped to learn Pastor Petit’s opinion as to whether or not he should accept the position Shannon mentioned—if indeed it was offered. Like Shannon’s father, his pastor, Rev. Isaac Petit, was a French Huguenot. Ian thought of him as a friend or family member—like a grandfather or a trusted uncle.
Pastor Petit and his wife settled in Scotland years before Ian was born. A widower now, the gentleman was getting on in years. Yet he won Ian’s respect and devotion because of his gentleness, his charitable works, and his excellent Bible teachings.
The pastor’s cottage was small but well kept, and located on a road not far from the church. Ian noticed a weak light glowing through a front window as he walked up. A light rain dotted his brown jacket as he stood on the stoop and knocked.
Ian waited. His pastor was hard of hearing. He knocked again.
The door opened. Pastor Petit held a lighted candle. “Mr. Colquhoun, it is good to see you this evening. Please, come in and sit by the fire. The spring season is still fairly young, and it’s damp—far too chilly for my old bones. I was about to have tea. I will pour a cup for you, and we shall have a cozy talk.”
Ian and his pastor met in the church office often, but he hadn’t visited his home in a long time. While the pastor went to pour the tea, Ian brushed off his shoes and stepped inside.
Oak bookcases crammed with books framed the stone fireplace in the sitting room. He was about to sit down when he noticed that an English Bible lay opened on a table by the pastor’s chair. The minister gave Ian an English Bible soon after he learned that Ian hoped to one day become a man of the cloth, and Ian loved and respected the old gentleman all the more for it.
He doubted that his pastor would advise him to become an assistant to a vicar in the English church. Still, he wanted to hear what he might say regarding the matter.
Pastor Petit handed Ian a cup of warmed tea and settled onto the high-backed armchair facing him. “You are well, I hope.”
“Oh, yes sir. I am well indeed.”
“And your family?”
“They are well, too.”
The minister smiled. “Good.” He took a sip of tea, setting his cup on the small table beside the Bible. “Did you know that we are told in the Holy Scriptures to present our bodies to God as a living sacrifice? I was reading about it shortly before you came in.”
“No Pastor, I did not. But it sounds reasonable, considering all the Lord has done for us.”
“You are exactly right, and that scripture is found in the Book of Romans—chapter twelve and verse one.” He reached for his Bible, placing it on his lap. “I had a dream a night or two ago, Mr. Colquhoun, and in it, you were asking me questions—as you and other young people in the church often do. In the dream you said that when you give your body as a living sacrifice in prayer as Scripture says to do that a troubling thought often comes to your mind. You said that when you meant to say ‘I give my body as a living sacrifice,’ the words ‘I give my body to be burned’ comes to your mind instead.”
“Yes, I’ve had troubling dreams like that.” Ian leaned forward slightly in his chair. “How did you know?”
“I didn’t.”
“So what is the meaning of your dream, sir?” Ian asked.
“Only God knows the meaning of dreams. But if we wish to pray or do as God tells us to do and something like a voice or voices tells us to say or do something contrary to the Scriptures, we must assume that the devil is attempting to somehow hinder our Christian walk.”
A shiver shot through him. “You mean Satan?”
“Yes. But don’t take my word for it. I could be wrong. Read the Bible for yourself.”
Ian gazed down at his cup without saying anything more. His pastor was a true man of God, and he’d given Ian something new and different to think about. But it might take time before the words took root in his mind. Pastor Petit had presented him with many deep teachings in the last year or so—teachings he’d never had the time to mediate on as he should. If he decided to go to England with Shannon and the earl, he would have many hours to think on these things during the long journey to the earl’s estate.
“Thank you for that teaching, sir. You can be sure that I will think on your words again.” Ian took a sip of tea, wondering if he should jump in with questions of his own or allow the minister to say more on the current topic. He’d allowed the old gentleman to control the conversation. Was it time to explain the reason for his visit?
After a moment, Ian said, “You know, Pastor, that I felt called to go into the ministry years before I told my family. And I wanted you to be the first to know that I might soon have the opportunity to travel to England and become the assistant to a minister there.”
“What a wonderful opportunity for a young man like you, Mr. Colquhoun. Going to England will not only broaden your horizons, it will help you develop as a man of God. What is the name of the clergy you will be working under? It is possible I might have heard of him.”
“I doubt you would have.” Ian hesitated, sending up a quick prayer for the courage to continue. “You see, if I choose to take this assignment, I will be serving under a vicar in the British church.”
“The British church? I am indeed surprised. How did this come to be? And you a loyal Scotsman.”
“Miss Shannon Aimee hopes to pay a visit to the home of the Earl of Northon—well chaperoned of course, but I dare not trust the earl. Miss Aimee told of the possible opportunity for me to become the assistant to the earl’s confessor, and I—”
“Say no more. I think I understand your motive here.” The pastor lifted his cup to his lips and took a sip of tea. “You wish to protect Miss Aimee from what could be a dangerous situation.”
“That is my hope. Otherwise, I would never consider traveling all the way to Gatehaven.”
The pastor’s eyes widened. “Gatehaven, did you say?”
“Yes. That is the name of the earl’s estate.”
The pastor grew pale. Before Ian could make a comment, the old man pulled a white cloth from the belt of his dark clothing and wiped his brow.
Ian rushed to his side. “Are you all right, sir?”
“I will be. Give me a moment.”
Ian reached for his tea, pressing it to the pastor’s lips. “Here, sir, drink this.”
Pastor Petit swallowed a mouthful of tea. Then he closed his eyes and pressed his head against the back of his chair.
“Should I go for a physician?”
“No. I am not ill. Merely surprised.” The pastor opened his eyes. “But this is all so peculiar.”
“Peculiar? How is that so, sir?”
The pastor’s smile looked weak. “Sometimes the Lord answers prayer in unusual ways.” He shook his head as if he couldn’t believe what he’d just heard. “My cousin was murdered in England some years ago.”
“Murdered?”
“Yes. Her name was Magdalena Petit, and she was thirty-five years of age when she died. It was tragic for my late wife and me because Magdalena was always very special to us. We never had any children of our own, and when Magdalena’s parents died, she lived with us for several years. Magdalena was also a Huguenot, and during her eighteenth year, she moved back to England to live with an older sister. However, we corresponded often. My wife and I were devastated to learn of her death—doubly so because her murderer was never found.”
“Sure and that is a tragedy, Pastor Petit.”
“Indeed. I’d been praying that the person who killed Magdalena would come to justice. Three years ago, I started corresponding with a vicar in England whose parish is near Gatehaven—the very estate you mentioned. I think the vicar there might know more about my cousin’s death than he is willing to say in a letter. Perhaps he fears the letter might fall into unfriendly hands. The vicar has suggested several times that I journey to England and pay him a visit so we can discuss this crime face-to-face. However, I cannot leave my flock here in Scotland. I will soon leave the village for good and retire to the country in my old age. However, you could go as my ambassador, Mr. Colquhoun, if the position is offered to you and you go to England partly on my behalf.”
“I am not a member of the Church in England, sir,” Ian explained. “As you well know, I am a member of the Reformed Church. Of what benefit would becoming the assistant to an English vicar be to me?”
The pastor leaned forward. Ian noted that a bit of color had returned to his cheeks.
“Much good could come of this, Mr. Colquhoun. Not only would you be protecting a young woman’s honor, you might also bring a criminal to justice, and you should gain much from working under my friend, the vicar. He is a true man of God, and he reads his Bible daily.” The pastor motioned toward a desk by the door leading to the other room. “I have received many letters since the vicar penned a letter to me the first time, and I have kept them all. I keep them in the drawer of my desk, and I want you to have them.”
“I cannot take your letters, sir.”
“It would be a gift to you from me and my late cousin.”
“But I am not sure I will be given the position in England that I mentioned.”
“Take the letters and read them even if you are not selected. I beg you. You will please an old man if you do.”
Ian opened the drawer that his pastor mentioned and found a stack of letters tied with a black ribbon and arranged by date. He felt a little uncomfortable taking them to his house and reading them, but at the same time, the idea intrigued him.
That night, Ian opened the first one.
Dear Pastor Petit,
My named is Mr. E.G. Steen, and I am a vicar serving at a parish in England near Gatehaven—an estate owned by the Earl of Northon. While on holiday in London recently, I met the son of another English earl at a church, and he told me about a terrible injustice. He said that a Frenchwoman living in England by the name of Magdalena Petit was murdered twenty years ago. Her house was burned to the ground, and her murderer was never found.
After I returned home, I could not forget what the gentleman told me—as if it had been nailed to my mind. A few days after that, I read a list of pastors living in Scotland in a post I received from a friend from another village. When I read your name on that list I thought of Magdalena Petit. I cannot help but wonder if you might be related to her.
It would be advantageous to both of us if we could discuss this mystery in more detail. But in any case, I hope to hear from you soon.
Respectfully,
E.G. Steen, Rector
Saint Thomas Church
Fairs, England
Seated at his father’s desk in the small sitting room of his family home, Ian put the letter back on the stack. To think that God might use him to help bring a murderer to justice was more than he ever thought possible. He would need to pray now and read the Bible to learn God’s will for his life. It seemed incredible that the Lord might use him in this way. And Shannon could be in great danger. Regardless of her feelings for the earl, the fact that he might also be able to protect her made going to England sound very appealing.
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Return tomorrow for Part 5 of 10 Parts.  


Tuesday, March 4, 2014

GATEHAVEN: Part 2 (10 Parts in All)

by Molly Noble Bull


Gatehaven by Molly Noble Bull is a Gothic Historical Novel with a strong Christian message and set in a scary mansion in the north of England. Scroll down to read the first six chapters in a new format. 
Gatehaven was divided into ten parts. Each day for ten days one of the ten parts were to be posted on a different blog. 



Below is the list of blogs so you will know exactly where to go each day to read Gatehaven. But if you miss a day, no problem. I will post each of the ten parts right here on my Writers Rest blog on the day after each posted date.

.   Daily Chapter Excerpt for Gatehaven can be found at:

March 5: #3 Barbara Derksen www.barbaraannderksen.com
March 6: #4 Cheryl Colwell www.inspiredfictionbooks.com
March 11: #7 Emma Right emmaright.com/blog
March 12: #8 Kimberly Payne www.kimpayne.wordpress.com
March 13: #9 Martin Roth www.martinroth.com.au
March 14: #10 Molly Noble Bell writersrest.blogspot.com



Part Two of Ten

Luss, Scotland—four months later


“The Earl of Northon?” Shannon’s mother stared at her with a hint of mockery in her eyes. “When did he ask you to be his wife?”
“Last night, Mama, after the service at our church. You saw me talking to him in plain sight. And I promised to travel to England with him to meet his family.”
“No!” Her mother popped up from the couch, her hands trembling. “That is out of the question. I will not allow it.”
“Will not allow it?” Shannon couldn’t believe what she had just heard. What could have caused her mother to be so upset? “Why, Mama? I thought you and Papa liked the earl.”
“I said the English earl was handsome. But Ian Colquhoun is handsome, too.”
“Did you refuse to let me go to England because you want me to marry Ian? Is that the real reason?”
 Her mother shook her head. “I cannot allow you to go to England because I cannot go along as your chaperone—even if the baby were not on the way. It is much too dangerous.”
“Now Rachel.” Her father reached out and took her mother’s hand. “What happened in England was a long time ago.” He gently pulled Mama back down to the settee. Then he put his arm around her. “I agree with your concerns. But England should be safe for any of us now.”
“But Javier.”
“Do not worry, my love. With the baby coming and all, it would not be good for your health.”
Mama crossed her arms over her chest. “I cannot stop worrying.”
Papa gazed at her mother with gentle, comforting eyes. “Have you forgotten that we are under the shadow of the Almighty and that one day we will enter the pearly gates of heaven?”
His voice sounded as kind as he was. But Shannon noted a wrinkle on his forehead above his dark eyebrows.
“We moved here because we thought Scotland was a safe place for Huguenots to live,” her father said. “But Scotland is not fit for Scots or Huguenots since the British took over. Were it not for the fighting across the sea, we would have moved to Charles Towne years ago—where your Uncle Henri lives today. Henri thinks we should emigrate now, and I want us to leave as soon as possible.”
But did anyone care what Shannon thought or wanted? She’d made it clear that she wished to marry the earl and move to his estate in England. But was anybody listening?
“In the colonies, we will practice our faith in peace.” Her father hesitated before going on. “I have known some good Englishmen and some who are bad. Now I also know the earl.
“With a few exceptions, I have no love for the British or the earl you say you love, Rachel Shannon. He talks to you before and after church meetings but seldom speaks to us. But even if I approved of him, I would never allow my only daughter to make such a journey without a chaperone.” He gazed down at her mother’s large belly. “Obviously, your mother cannot travel now. Your grandmother would not be of much help either since she speaks mostly French. Besides, as I said, we plan to sail to the colonies as soon as the baby is able to travel. We expect you to go along with us.”
“Papa, you know I would never consider going to England until after my baby brother or sister is born. I made that clear to the earl. His aunt, Miss Foster, lives with other members of his family at the earl’s hunting lodge near here, and she has promised to serve as my chaperone. Miss Foster is coming with the earl when he comes to ask for my hand, and I know you will like her. She and her personal maid will ride along in the carriage with us. So as you can see, everything has been arranged.”
“Why must you go to England?” her mother asked. “It seems to me that the proper thing would be for his family to come to Scotland—to meet us.”
“The earl said that there are some things his mother and grandmother want to teach me.”
“Teach you? You’ve had a wonderful education. What do they expect you to learn?”
“They want—” Shannon hesitated. “I think they hope to teach me the social graces.”
“Social graces?” Her mother looked at her father, and they both frowned. “Perhaps you better explain.”
“We are not rich and titled like the earl’s family is. I would have thought you and Papa would be pleased that I will be marrying a wealthy and titled man.”
Mrs. Rachel Aimee bit her bottom lip. “No doubt his mother and grandmother want to teach you the correct way to pour English tea into a cup. Is that not so?”
Shannon didn’t answer because that probably was what the earl’s family had in mind. Maybe they didn’t approve of the match. Maybe her parents didn’t either. But Edward Wellesley, the Earl of Northon, said he loved her. And she loved him. Nothing else mattered.
She thought of the tender words of love that the earl had whispered in her ear at the ball and again after church on Sunday. She’d never been kissed by anyone but her parents. But one afternoon the earl pulled her into a shadowy area right there in the churchyard, and when nobody was looking, he kissed her. Her parents would be outraged if they knew. Still, she would never forget the thrill of it—the excitement. She would marry the earl if she had to run away to do it.
Her father stared at her for a moment. “It appears to me that the earl and his family do not think you are good enough.”
She blinked because she really hadn’t been listening.
“In return,” he went on, “I say that he is not good enough for you, and I intend to remind him of that when he comes here. Though we do not have a great deal of earthly wealth and do not even own the farm we live on, we are children of the King of the Universe, and we have a great deal of wealth stored where rust cannot change its value and thieves cannot steal it.”
“Please, Papa. Promise me that you will not say anything like that to the earl. And please refrain from speaking French in front of him.”
“And why not?”
Too late, Shannon realized that asking her father to make such a promise was not likely to soothe his ruffled feelings. He could feel insulted.
“Forgive me, Papa, for not showing you proper respect. But I wanted you to know that the earl and his family are acquainted with the French language but speak mostly English. They—they attend the Church of England every Lord’s Day—just like we attend our church.” Shannon wondered what to say next because the earl had implied that his family didn’t think God was as important as hers did. “Well, maybe they aren’t as devout as we are, but they do go to church. The earl has been attending our church since I met him at the ball, and he might take offense if we suggested that his family are not true believers.”
“Your mama and I have worried for some time that you are not as close to the Lord as we think you should be, Rachel Shannon.”
His words hit Shannon in the heart like a fiery dart. “Is it not true that I go to church every time you and Mama and Peter do?”
Her father slowly nodded.
“Yet you never once doubted that my brother is a good Christian. Only me.” Shannon’s voice quivered with hurt and embarrassment, and unless something was done, her watery eyes were sure to become encased in full-blown tears. “Why, Papa? Why is that so?”
“You must discover the answer to that question for yourself. In the meantime, your mother and I withhold our permission for you to go to England.”
Shannon felt drained—as if all hope had been surgically removed from her body. If she didn’t leave at once she might throw something across the room or disgrace herself in some other way.
“I have some thinking to do.” Shannon glanced toward the door. “May I be excused from this conversation? I would like to go for a walk.”
“Go. Your mother and I also have some thinking to do. But stay within the grounds of the farm. We would worry if you ventured out alone beyond the front gate.”
Shannon hurried outside. On the verge of exploding with pent-up anger, she kicked a rock with the toe of her brown leather shoe. It sailed through the air and landed on the grass a short distance away.
Her childhood friend, Ian Colquhoun, hit the trunk of a tree with both fists when he was angry. She’d also seen other Scottish men fighting trees and their demons in such a way. But her father was a gentle man. It was unlikely that he would do such a thing.
Shannon fisted her hands and stared at them. They looked fair and soft—unthreatening. Still, if a tree was nearby, she might wham it to discover for herself the advantage of giving in to primitive urges. The longer she stood there, the more she wanted to hit something.
She would find a way to go to England. She simply must.
Ian Colquhoun had heard some disturbing news. His sister, Kate, had said that Shannon Aimee planned to marry the Earl of Northon. Though Shannon begged Kate not to tell anyone, Kate told Ian the news right away.
He hurried down the road that led to the farm managed by Shannon’s father.
Ian had intended to marry Shannon as soon as he saved a bit more money. In fact, he’d planned to make Shannon his wife since they were children. It never occurred to him that she would fall in love with an arrogant snob like the earl. But now…
Oh, Shannon was a beauty, all right, with that long auburn hair and green eyes. It was not surprising that the earl would want her.
Ian’s father had said that Shannon looked exactly like her mother did on the day she and her father arrived in Luss, and that Mrs. Aimee was still a handsome woman. Ian agreed. Shannon’s mother was a very pretty lady. However, in his eyes, Mrs. Rachel Aimee could never compare in beauty and charm to Shannon, her lovely and exciting daughter.
True, Ian had never kissed Shannon or discussed topics like love and marriage, but he’d assumed she knew how he felt. Then he saw Shannon and the earl dancing together at a ball given by Ian’s rich uncle, and he’d wondered if his chances to win her were lost.
But why would an English earl marry a Scottish girl like Shannon?
She had no wealth, no title or connections, and her parents came from France. The earl could pick from any number of attractive young women of quality in his own country. If the earl’s intentions were less than honorable, Ian intended to prove it. In fact, he would stop this union before it took place. He just needed to figure out how to do it.